The Talon Lord looks great! The bronze color will make him stand out, which I think is good because from what I've read in the book these guys "bring the pain".
I like it, period. The bronze is "red enough" to compliment the green color you have chosen and in my opinion satisfies the color wheel gods. (Not that my opinion means anything...your models = your creativity.) Nice work on the staff part of his weapon too. A good job overall.
I'm curious as to what color/brand of primer you used on the Mallet Warriors, as it kinda looks metallic.