Not bad at all!
One piece of advice on the washes. Mix about 3 drops of water, and one drop of black paint. Mix and apply. As you figure out the exact mix that works best for you, you can thin with more water, or thicken with more paint. For you bedrolls on the backpack, mix brown paint and water. As you use this basic wash, you will see where other colors can be used to make a good wash. I.E. a dark blue wash over light blue, a red wash over yellow, and many more.
When you get comfortable with the effects, you will want to mix the paint with a mixture of water and acrylic floor wax. The floor wax causes the washes to spread more evenly. Take my word for it, that will help a lot. In the US, the floor wax is sold under the Future brand name. No idea on other parts of the world.
After that, you will want to do some drybrushing to bring out highlights. Between washes, for shadows, and drybrushing to highlight, your figures will look even better.
And, when you have all that done, flock your bases. Flocking makes the figure look totally finished.
You are doing a fine job, please take this advice as a tip to keep improving.
